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Post by Gnomesley on Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:02 pm

Out of character Information: I really like to
have some fun by playing some good role playing games. I've played
games like Fallout Three, Fable two, World of Warcraft and Dragon age
Origin. All of these game that i've played make you have to choose a
path... Good, Evil Kill or save.The main reason I like this is because I
like having a chose in what I can do.

When I play any kind of role playing game I can't expect anything to
happen. Like in Dragon Age Origins you can persuade or intimadate, both
have a chance at failure or a chance at success. So you never know which
one is going to happen. Or a role playing game like this. You don't
know what is going to happen. How the Wehrmacht will react or the
civilians living here. So
all you can do is some passive role playing. Like do a /me or talk about
whats happening like you dont know what is really happening. This might
sound boring to some people but not me. Give me a role playing game I
wont leave the room until I either beat the game or the console breaks.
When I walk around in the streets of this city I study everything in
I might be able to do that later.

Steam friends name Gnomesley

SteamID: STEAM_0:1:17046451

Why do you want to join the Wehrmacht? I want to
join the Wehrmact because it sounds like a it can be alot of fun, its something different from all the other RP servers that i have come across etc that offer quite generic classes to play as and as far as i am concerned, this is the best 194x server i have been in touch with that i wish to pursue the act of playing as a german soldier.

What do you think the Wehrmacht will be like for you?
I think the Wehrmact life will be a lot of hard work. Keeping the peace in the city and responding appropriately to my commanding officers and to the civilians that are reporting crimes and so on and so forth.
I believe that It will be a similar expierence to the civil protection, with the exception you actually have a heart and not as cold as stone.

What are you expected to do in the Wehrmacht? To be an active contributing Roleplayer

I also expect myself to be a fair player, both In character and Out of character. Strict but not
overly strict. I realise that the soldiers in this army are really just young men fighting a war and doing there job, but are pushed by orders of their superiors and moral outlooks. I will be expected to never abuse my whitelist.

How are you expected to act in the Wehrmacht? I'm
expected to act as my superior wants me too. Whether it might be searching peoples homes, or Patroling the streets or guarding the HQ. I would not
complain I would obey his orders. I won't complain about anything
really. I wouldn't care if they didn't promote me I would wait. I'll be
patient whilst doing my orders. I won't mess around at my post either.

What is your characters background story?
As a young child Claes always dreamed about joining the German Police force. At
the age or 10 both his parents where killed in a car crash. Devastated Claes went to live with his uncle. When he lived there these men came
and took Claes away for conscription. For 2 years Claes worked to become a stalwart example of the strong backbone wehrmacht footsoldier.

After his training he was sent up north to begin his guard duties and general patrolling objectives, never really saw alot of field combat and his troop were split up multiple times before he was stationed in this russian city. His commanding officer set his first duties...

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In character

Name: Claes Oldenburg

Age: 35.

Height: 6'2.

Hair colour: Dirty blonde.

Eye colour: Grey.

Gender: Male

Race: Caucasian

Distinguishing marks: A small birthmark on the
back of my neck. And a scar on my back.

List previous fields you are experienced in: I
know some medical procedures. And combat tactics

Have you had any previous affiliation with the Wehrmacht? I
have not.

Have you received any infractions from and officer?
If yes, Explain: I have not.

Explain your reason for applying for the Wehrmacht and
wishing to become a officer:
I wish to become an officer for one soul reason. I want to serve my country by fighting for my fuhrer's vision of a perfect world.


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Re: [DENIED] Gnomesley's App

Post by Shadow on Wed Jun 23, 2010 5:40 pm

Denied. Unfortunately, your backstory kind of made me go "wat.." You need to be much more descriptive, a backstory is a piece of writing that describes your character to a full extent. Childhood, life growing up, why do they want to join the Wehrmacht, etc. And it was too short. Feel free to apply again in six days.

Also, refrain from posting pending applications in the accepted forum.


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